I love the meaning, nicely written.

Wow such a powerful poem.. I think a lot of people have been in the same situations to some digree weather its being the friend wanting to end it all or being the friend standing by and hoping they make the right choice. And its really hard when u know how much pain they are in and you cant do anything to fix it. Nice job and thanx for your comment it means a lot

Not as good as the others I've read. But it was still good. And with this stanza:

'Now I do now know what to say
I have told her how I may help her cope
and rid of her dismay
although, now all I can do now is hope.'

Maybe change it to:

'Now I do know what to say
I have told her how I may help her cope
and rid of her dismay
although, now all I can do is hope.'

All the nows kinda threw it off. =] Great poem though. 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Aww nuts thats a miss spelling... should be 'not'

'Now I do not know what to say
I have told her how I may help her cope
and rid of her dismay
although, now all I can do is hope.'

It was more heartfelt than anything. Some words were stronger than others. Not that great with some of what it was. Nice ending line. Enjoyed how this was. But it wasn't exactly as great as some others. Thought that there were some strong points but they were kinda buried deep. Nice thoughts portrayed within this one.
~Faith-less