Goodbye for noW

Aaawww. that made me cry!! didnt see that coming.. but i guess i shuda coz im lsnin to this song..... OMG.. how i hate goodbyes.. still cant get over the fact that i wont see some of my frends forever now :(.. o sorry, bak to ur poem.. i just love it.. i think i love all poems that make me cry.. i loved how u made the events so clear i cud see it ryt in front of my eyes..

i cant say i like a stanza in particular coz the whole thing just sticks together.. but i think i liked ur last one extra.. just check with the syllable count on the line before the last coz its too short for the rest of the lines in the stanza

beautifully done..
keep it up
take care
NannO

Fantastic poem, expreesed so well and without a single flaw

This is Fantastic...YOU ARE GOOD...I say it once...I'll say it another time...AWESOME

Hi hunn.. gr8 poem of course 5/5. ne ways i wish that everything is alright n i wish that u r happy and having a lot of fun coz its rele nice to know that at least there is someone feels alright.
ne way wish u lots of luck... lots of love - hoping - ur friend Ahmad.

Thats soo sweet! i love the description, especially this part:

You stroked my hair
As i burried my head in your chest
It hurts me so much
I finally confessed

You lifted my chin
Our lips touched for the final time
realy good.
(heart)ash