I must say, the idea behind this poem is brilliant. Must have come from a very intelligent mind...lol!
Seriously, the way you are able to take an idea and put a well written poem to paper so quickly, astounds me.
I enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing it.
Love ya~Holly

This is a great poem i cant believe
this well i have to say your the best poem writer ive seen on this website
and thats no lie 5/5

Wow. nice metaphor. it's metaphor rite? lol. i'm so dumb. really sweet poem! this was ur first poem huh? damn it's good!