by Misha Sep 18, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I want to draw, |
by Z
Awesome! |
by Ariana
I quite like this, there are some grammer mistakes which hold it back, but otherwise, i like the fact that you used repetition without sounding over-the-top of boring, and also that the whole piece deals with a common theme but does not sound cliched. Sorry I needed more full stops there LOL. |
by Kurt
Wow. That is a great job. I loved it. And you didn't have to follow the normal styles or type of poetry. You went out and perfected your own. Amazing. |