It was going really well and I was loving it untill the end, the end just isn't right

I just found out that i named a poem just the same. I like yours, would be greatfull if you would read mine too, same name but really differnet.
dwight

It's a very nice poem. The title is kinda overused but that's the best thing. When you look for a poem yours popped out because of your name too. I really like the concept. I can't seem to make my poems like that. :)