So sweet, such a preferance, so good, 5/5, keep up the gd wrk! x x x

"Once its all done
When youre good and gone
Im left in such awe"
it's
you're
i'm

I liked the simple repitition of certain phrases and ideas, like the fire and the flame, or the for ___ing, nice poem! heh

I kno that the lines are supposed to have it's you're and i'm, but when i submitted it, it screwed up the apostrophes and made em weird symbols so i just got rid of it

Dude... this is hot. That was hot. You are hot. good job. :)

Aken Sol