Who could?

by ThugPoet   Sep 18, 2005


The sunrises as the sky flaunts all sorts of colors,
but all I can think of is Her because they'll never be another,
who could breath the way She did, so still and serene,
who could be my heaven, my earth, and everything in between, my Queen,
who could have my heart throbbing stuck in my throat,
who could rest my soul, bring comfort to my essence whenever She spoke,
who could possess my thoughts, and take control of my love,
who could find for me so many reasons to be, strengthen my conviction in the One above,
who could smile the way She does, what under Gods kingdom can bargain its worth.
who could have me contemplating my life, putting Her happiness first.
who could hold me the way She did, in Her arms I had embraced purpose,
who could leave me stranded here in myself, with out Her I've come to know really what thirst is,
who could be so beautiful, and I haven't even scratched the surface,
who could be so perfect?

She, my Love, my Life, is just that, who could make me feel the way I feel,
Truth is, with out Her, I'm not even real.

*I Love You*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Unbreakable

    The effects of love
    i don't plan on experiencing it

  • 19 years ago

    by Anthony

    Hey man. I know hao you feel. This is how i felt about my Ex. This is an awesome poem. 5/5

    ~Anthony
    ~~Jeffery
    ~~~Dahmer

  • 19 years ago

    by lilia

    Wow!!! amazing i really liked it.. i loved how you put your words together sooo perfectly. this girl is very lucky to have you, and she should know that!!!! your an amzing poet and i cant wait to read more. thanks sooo much for commenting it means alot to me...
    ~lilia~

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Loving and emotional, beautifully written. Such a loving heart you have.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww wow fantastic my dear, It is very expressive and it has a VERY unique style to it, amazing poem you wrote here hun, you have some great talent keep it up!

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