Its a really nice and lovely poem! You did a great job 5/5...I love the last few lines because they were really honest and sweet...lucky girl she most be :-). I'm really glad you share your poems with us, keep it up and take care!

Aww wow fantastic my dear, It is very expressive and it has a VERY unique style to it, amazing poem you wrote here hun, you have some great talent keep it up!

Loving and emotional, beautifully written. Such a loving heart you have.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Wow!!! amazing i really liked it.. i loved how you put your words together sooo perfectly. this girl is very lucky to have you, and she should know that!!!! your an amzing poet and i cant wait to read more. thanks sooo much for commenting it means alot to me...
~lilia~

Hey man. I know hao you feel. This is how i felt about my Ex. This is an awesome poem. 5/5

~Anthony
~~Jeffery
~~~Dahmer

The effects of love
i don't plan on experiencing it