by erely
Your poems touch me so...Well Done |
by Samantha
Awe... that was beautiful... tears...i loved the way you wrote it... it was one of the best ive ever written... simply amazing... nice work... oh and for you advice at the end... thanks but its to late for me anyways.. haha... |
Excellent poem ,I really liked it very much. looking forward to reading more of your work...Keep it up. |
by H E Losey
A tale told well by one who appears to be experienced in this oft traveled road. I can empathize as one whose heart has taken a similar path. I could have used a bit of punctuation to help with the difference in our linguistic cadence. Otherwise a completely enjoyable read. |