Its so intense & beautiful.... my poem is pretty similar to this... do check out "murder or suicide" pls vote & comment ... u got 5/5 ; )

Very sad....instead of "crabbed" i think you meant "grabbed" haha but it was very good....just a few minor mistakes

Okay i dont know, this wasn't one of the best poems ive read i will be honest i dont like it, i think poetry is meant to flow and yes i know it dosnt have to rhyme but thats the way i like poems.....but rhyming or not i think this was choppy and i dunno i didnt like it sorry....your a good writer but this wasnt one of my favorites

Hey good job awesome

Wow... i think this one should be under the dark category. it is rather dark and sad... good, nonetheless, but definitely has room for improvement.

Nice, You have an interesting Style That I truly havent read one like so before.... Good Work...I think you spelled Grabbed Wrong...You wrote Crabbed.. I don't know if that was on purpose Or not but i figured I'd tell you

Omgosh..thats crazy. very good poem. i dunno why but its easier for me to follow these types of poems when they dont rhyme. weird...

Ummm... hey... good poem... keep up.. though I can't relate that much...

The emptyness of death is upon you in this one .. i like it alot .. nice work hun

Well done, amazing poem, your so talented and its very emotional.
My love, Tara-Kay xx

This is a strong poem... And very good too

Amazng poem...very powerful..Your a good poet keep up the good work....5/5

I thought it was brilliant! but....i really do hate reading about suicide, sorry. your poem was beautiful though. jesx

All your poems are amazing...

Great work it was like i could see the girl cutting herself and dying. wonderful just wonderful
Juls

Thats really good. how u wrote that u laughed through it, the 1st time i tried, ppl told me i woke up in the hospital laughing, it jus made me think of that and i havent though bout that in a while... neways, very deeply written and i get a lot of thought out of it... nice job

That was amazing. i loved the ending too. u are an awesome writer. keep up the good poems,
cya
sore

Lots of feeling. i like! u hv SUCH a good imagination! i luv ur style!
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Um... I thought it is very deep but still, I can just see the girl covered in blood. Not a pretty sight, anyway but still it is a great poem!!

Omg i no how u feel about this one too! grate write keep it up 5/5 !
ashley