by Katlynn Sep 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The kisses are something different. |
by Andrea
Wow very long. it was really good except i had a hard time following... |
by amber
Its good but long so yeah like it but maybe think about separating it into two poems |
by Jamie
Okay i know my comments arnt nice, but thats okay i hope you give me honesty as well even if you wanna tell me i suck....... |
Very touching....sometimes i felt a force of rhyming....member poems dont hav to rhyme all the time...and flow is very important....but you showed alot of emotion in this one....4/5 great job |