Its great to have some1 in your life to love and receive love from....i used to have some1 like that...i loved him somuch....and still do....but this isnt about me...its about your poem...your poem was good. sorry there wasnt n/e thing special about it....try not to revise too much....just go w/ the flow and write w/e come to mind it'll work out perfectly

Wow...This one is great....I like it alot

Nice it is good keep it up

The rhyming could be better just to have a better flow and not so scattered. but otherwise it was good and sweet.