Omg this was excellent it made me cry!! very good my favorite one so far...so if i was alitte harsh on your other poems...i guess i only enjoy poems that are sad..haha....my problem i hav to deal w/ ha well this was so sad and touching...5/5!!!

Okay well this poem didn't make me cry its nothing i havnt read before however this is one of my favorites of yours.....you didn't try to rhyme whatsoever and it flowed so much better then the others 4/5 good job

I love it great poem great talent good gjob

Aww its so sad. tear
but..it didnt have much of a flow. i had to stop in a couple places but owell it was good.

Good poem...5/5
Becky