Still in my mind

by Erin   Sep 18, 2005


Why cant i forget?
why is my mind set?

everything i see
only reminds me

of the time we had together
and i thought it'd be forever

but i had no choice, i had to go
and you have me a letter that said how u loved me so

now i think it was just a goodbye
but i gotta tell u it made me cry

because you were true and said sweet things to me
everyword is glued in my memory

we emailed for a while and u called me too
if only i knew

that they grew fewer as time passed by
soon emails were only 2 lines

i tried real hard to keep contact with you
but it was harder then i ever knew

i didn't what happened, i don't know to this day
why u stopped talking, you didn't even say

im so confused i don't know what to do
tell if i did something wrong to you

so that i know the reason why
u said nothing but meant goodbye

and after all of this you're still on my mind
i guess you're truly just one of a kind

writers note: this is for my ex-boyfriend and because of him, i can never trust any guys because they say so much but then, they leave.

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  • 19 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Matters

    I'm sorry.. but not all guys are crap... I would never do that... I can't stand being mean to a girl... I am in love with my girlfriend, Kyleigh, and I honestly plan to never end it. But great, sad poem... I liked it. Full points. Thanks for the comment too.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Bennett

    Wow, this is beautiful. You should try beefing up your words just a little to entice the reader. but other that, simply awesome

  • 19 years ago

    by *cUrSeD lOvEr*

    I like this poem becuase guys are like that...give them what they want then leave or don't and they will leave.
    Thanx