This is actually a song that our band was going to do before we split ( hence the repetitive chorus and the bridge etc.). Have a read and tell me what you think.
It's like walls,
Closing in,
All around me,
Theres no doors,
I have sinned,
And I'm drowning,
No escape,
All the lies,
They have found me,
All the hate,
I despise,
It surrounds me,
I'm drowning in emotion
Stuck in the explosion
I'm drowning in emotion
And it seems like all the pain won't go away
Can't control,
My despair,
irritating
It's my fault,
There's no air,
Suffocating,
All alone,
In this world,
I'm creating,
It has grown,
Little girl's,
Overtaking,
I'm drowning in emotion
Stuck in the explosion
I'm drowning in emotion
And it seems like all the pain won't go away
Such a mess,
Building up,
It's at breaking speed,
All the stress,
Filling us,
With a guilty seed
Theres no hope,
In a ring,
Of endless greed
Horrorscope,
What it brings?
Death, he comes for me
I'm drowning in emotion
Stuck in the explosion
I'm drowning in emotion
And it seems like all the pain won't go away
Wipe my eyes,
And I think,
Of a life, no more
No more lies,
Theres nothing,
Worth living for,
This is it,
In a flash
I have grabbed the knife
It's so quick,
In a slash,
I have ended my life
I'm drowning, I'm drowning,
Save me I'm drowning
I'm drowning, I'm drowning,
Save me I'm drowning
I'm drowning in emotion
Stuck in the explosion
I'm drowning in emotion
And it seems like all the pain won't go away
I'm drowning in emotion
Stuck in the explosion
I'm drowning in emotion
