by Jamie Sep 18, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
*everyong should appriciate being sick.* |
Wow this one is just uterly amazing...so original....5/5...sorry i couldnt vote though b/c i read this b/4 and it wouldnt let me vote 5....o well...lol |
I know the feelin your talking about it was very good 5/5 |
by Hans Fausto
Hahahaha..a "sick" poem...nice one there...i like this poem...maybe i should get sick more often...lol....haha...nice work:D |
I love the peom...the flow and the beautiful choice of words. I did not favor the third paragraph, but I still loved it...I do believe you'll be going on my favorites list. :) Great job. |
Sounds like such a....CALMING feeling...i like it...your flow was awsome...and sorry i cant critique you better....but...i reallly didnt nothing wrong...i guess there were a couple parts i didnt get...but thats just b/c im a freakin dumbass |