Cough Suppressant * Thanks to Sore Throats

by Jamie   Sep 18, 2005


*everyong should appriciate being sick.*

*now that i understand i might be the only who knows what i mean...this is simply about the feeling you get when you are sick and are on cough medicane...i think it makes life easier everything is quieter and theres no doubt that your doing things right everything is simple and it all seems to make sense...your in a daze and everything is alright....*

Clouding over hazy eyes
Dulling things that I despise
Glossing over each flashy sound
Making brokenness profound

Wrong simply out of the question
No trace or sign of depression
Trances every fogged up motion
Certainty without devotion

Drowsy, unclear but secure
Too bad this daze cant endure
Softly and gently drops you down
This noisy city simply becomes a town

Swimming though the thoughtless air
Defying nerves that once were there
Bleaching where the tension lies
Suffocating laced up cries

Bleeding through the medication
Disappearing is frustration
Calm and safe is within reach
Thanks to this anxiety sucking leech

Tired serenity, this is right
Take it to get through each night
Always and forever lingers the temptation
To again and again create tranquil sensation

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  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Wow this one is just uterly amazing...so original....5/5...sorry i couldnt vote though b/c i read this b/4 and it wouldnt let me vote 5....o well...lol

  • 19 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I know the feelin your talking about it was very good 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Hans Fausto

    Hahahaha..a "sick" poem...nice one there...i like this poem...maybe i should get sick more often...lol....haha...nice work:D

  • 19 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I love the peom...the flow and the beautiful choice of words. I did not favor the third paragraph, but I still loved it...I do believe you'll be going on my favorites list. :) Great job.

    Sheena

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Sounds like such a....CALMING feeling...i like it...your flow was awsome...and sorry i cant critique you better....but...i reallly didnt nothing wrong...i guess there were a couple parts i didnt get...but thats just b/c im a freakin dumbass