Falling further

by Fallen Angel666   Sep 18, 2005


This pain just grows,
I can't get out,
Help me,
And I promise you,
If I make it,
I'll see you on the other side,
I'm falling further,
From where I need to be,
I'm just as lost as I was before,
I've gone hollow,
Now I'm just waiting here,
Till it's my time to die...

Comment please I really need it

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robin

    That was excellent. Definitely a 5/5. Something like that only needs to be expressed in a few words for the emotion to come pouring out,and you did it wonderfully. Amazing job, I hope to read some new poems from you soon.
    Xox
    Robin
    Ps. if you get a chance, please check out some of my stuff- thx : )

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