This is such a great poem, i love it, you are a great writer, keep on writing it does help when you want to get everything out! can you please check out my 2 poems a life of total unhappiness and goodbye everyone (4 real) please comment on them it would mean alot! mwah if u need someone to talk to im here luv always maddison xxx

This something great! Very well done!! If you have time you can check few of my poems. Keep writing!