Aww this girl is very lucky to have some1 who cares bout her as much as u do!U are a very good writer keep goin this girl will realize how much u love her in the long run!Good luck God Bless

Awww.....that was really sweet....great poem

Aww that is the sweetest poem i have ever red....seriously it is great....i wish i could write up something like that...lol omg ive read most of ur poems and seriously as scary as it is....i can relate to almost every single one of them!
your an amazing writter....i seriously think you could go somewhere with these poems! that how good i think they are.... If its okay with you... can i please use this poem and give it to someone....because like you said in the poem that you couldnt find the words to say to this person...that is exactly how i feel about someone! and id love to be able to give them this poem...thats if you'll let me....
Keep ^ the AMAZING work!
And ill keep reading! lol
Love Paige
xoxoxoxo
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Dang this was a good poem for the most part. It should great emotion i'm just not a big fan of the AbAb rhyme but you made it work. I hope you two are still together.
-vino

Awww, this is so sweet, and cute!

Such a beautiful poem. I am sure no one in this world loves kirsty more than you.

This is beautiful. I love it!

I loved this. All too relatable to me right now. It's so frustrating when you have all these feelings that won't cooperate when trying to write.

This poem makes it to the bottom of every person's hart! Thanks for sharing!