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by Madi   Sep 18, 2005


You may not hit me
You may not see the tears
that come in swells
You may not see the pain
that you cause me
i love you because
at one time you loved me
when will you ever see
how happy you made me
but all the tears that collected over the years
have finally taken their toll
i cry everyday
and i want to run away
somebody stop me
this i pray

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kurt

    Not bad, a bit sketchy in the flow and the rhyming parts came at infrequent times. Keep writing and things will fall into place. You have a talent, don't let it slip away.