by Spoken Silence Sep 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The world stares you in the face |
Greatly written poem, I love it from the beginning to the end. It is deep, touching and so emotional. The ending is excellent, too. The fifth stanza is my favorite. |
by Lia Jnell
I loved it! especially how you made a chorus- like thing. it was really well done, but sad. keep up the good work. |