Comments : Betrayal, Anger, Silence

  • 19 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    I loved it! especially how you made a chorus- like thing. it was really well done, but sad. keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written poem, I love it from the beginning to the end. It is deep, touching and so emotional. The ending is excellent, too. The fifth stanza is my favorite.
    Keep up, 5/5.