This is such a great poem, i love it, you are a great writer, keep on writing it does help when you want to get everything out! can you please check out my 2 poems a life of total unhappiness and goodbye everyone (4 real) please comment on them it would mean alot! mwah if u need someone to talk to im here luv always maddison xxx

I felt the mood of this poem. the title is perfect and I love the way you ended this...keep up the good work

The Title Was An Eye-Cather! The Poem Spoke Brilliance Once Again Your Work Has Left Me Speechless...What More Can I Say Than 5.0? xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I really like this one.I know like many I can relate to the loneliness and futility we all sometimes experience.Most of my stuff is melancholic and sad, though often there is a tinge of hope.I love your title-I've always had a thing about gray.

You are becoming one of my favourites This is a good poem, very descriptive of emotional and psychological pain.Your poems flow and keep me reading to the end.

A bit dark you think?

Only in light
Can we read the words.

Peace

Very well written poem, wow...i think you've shown me grey is even more depressing than black!

I would just like to say, that you did a good job of writing this poem.
The emotions sorta drip from the words.
so... keep on writing, I dunno what else to say.

~*TasH*~

This poem was fantastic. It flowed really well and the imagery was brilliant! i loved every word of it! you're very, very talented. take care xox

This is really go, it's got a really smooth flow and really good language. Definitely a keeper! Thanks for the comments on my poems :) Muchos appreciated!

Great poem, keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Beautifully done. It was hauntingly real. It sounds like you have been there. Sometimes saddness and dispair takes over you soul. 5/5

Wow how do you come up with it all? You're pure genious. I love it.