Really great poem! i loved it! you have a great unique ability! i'm here 4 u if u need 2 talk! please check out 2 of my poems called 'goodbye everyone (4 real) and a life of total unhappiness! plz comment and vote on them.....love lots, Maddison xxxx

Poem it's self really good.. But what you were saying.. Meh.. Lies... No one is lying to you. You got to learn that not everyone is heartless. Love you Sarah Smile for me ^^
Angel

I don't understand why someone would do this to themselves, pushing away the lies because you think that person is keeping you alive. Like they're the only one out there who says "I love you" even if they don't mean it. But they don't understand that there is -someone- out there who will say those words, and mean it too. But if you're hiding in those lies, you won't find them.

"They torture me,
In the sweetest of ways..."

I love that line. I'm a sucker for oxymorons. Keep your head up babe, I hope you're alright. I love you, my pretty pistol.

Your pretty fabulous drumset queen,
Renee

Excellent job. That had a very cool style to it. You are extremely talented. Awesome poem.
~The Bleeding Child