Really great poem! i loved it! you have a great unique ability! i'm here 4 u if u need 2 talk! please check out 2 of my poems called 'goodbye everyone (4 real) and a life of total unhappiness! plz comment and vote on them.....love lots, Maddison xxxx

That's really good. I love the way it sounds. It's written really well. You're a really good writer!