by Lonely Heart .ღ. Sep 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Love and obsession |
by Dark Kitten
It is such a sweet and romantic poem. I loved it. -sighs- |
by Jimmy
This is a great peom. loved it |
by Goth
O.K.... now there you go the rhyming in this one went well, although a few were "forced" thats o.k. |
5/5 Good, except I didn't like the ending all too much...Don't take it personal or nothing...Just being honest...lol...I think with your creativity you could have ended itbetter...Keep it Up.. |
Not a bad poem, though I'm not much into love poems...I do love the way you rhymed though, good job. |