Wow amazing i feel this way abou tsoem one to keep your head up thats all i can say lovely job. 5.5

That is a wonderful poem and i hope your relationship turns out great

sending love

allalone

I'm going to be an honest critique here (Please don't let it hurt your feelings because you know I love your poetry!! ;-;) but i didn't feel a flow, but the last line really grabbed me and i felt it deep in my heart, the poem was very very good but it just didn't have aflow to it. but you know i still liked it! :D

This is an excellent poem. I like the repetition of the words "you" and "too" which make the poem flow very well, emphasising those two words throughout. The structure is efficient, and the diction is very good. In short, very well done!

Aw this is sooooo sweeet i loved it! 5/5 nice repetition type thing