A rose bleeds

by sarah   Sep 19, 2005


A rose can drip blood of an innocent girl,
But still may never cover the detailed swirl.
You can almost kiss the shot red frantic heart,
But may never see the heartbeat again start.
Love may never curl in its soft petals now,
But the frightful shrieking screams will take a vow.
The rose only bleeds when it has been stomped on,
And when the rose bleeds it turns a color of fawn

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  • 18 years ago

    by charles

    I thought your poem lacked some emotion,it fell short with the descriptive language you need to work on that a little more other than that it was fine.

  • 18 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    Great poem, it was nice and short wonderfully writen, thank you very much for commenting on my poem 'How Does She Manage' and sure, you can send it out to people if you want.

  • 18 years ago

    by fastforward

    Wow. your poems are amazing. so different then everyone elses. i loved it.
    fuking incredible.

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Great imagery with metaphorical properties. i loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great job and thanks for the comments
    on mine...take care

    hugs, love, Ann

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