Very well said.. so much emotion i love it..i love you and your poems..ke p it up

chin up lil soldja

-angel-

Oh.

(all i can comment about)

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leaves me thinking...
blankly lol
^_^ its great,five star

Good poem amazing emotion. Best part is it didn't require a rhythm for the reader to stay hooked. You just used an interesting subject and your raw talent. Bravo!

I voted your poem as a 5, it is absolutely wonderful! I love the meaning, the technique used to write it, everything. I love the introduction...very deep. Only suggestion is that you might actually thnk about placing it elsewhere...absolutely awesome poem though!

Awesome! I need to stop saying awesome but that's the word I think of when I read your stuff!

I just reread your poem and it's like every time I reread it I pick up something I missed the first time around.

and they believed in a faith
that was born after the death of the holy
Telling secrets when backs were turned

Most excellent lines. I hope you never stop sharing your talent with us. :)

That was a great poem, i never thoought fo things that way, very nice, wow, and thanks for commenting on my work :)