This is a very good poem.. i really liked it.. especially this part :The one I talk of
Is the one who makes
My heart go quick,
The one who holds me
As I cry away my pain,
The one who knows me
Better than I.

gret job.. follow ur dream!

Very well written. Great job.

**The "Strangers" poem was not written from experience. Just a little scenario I made up in my head.