Alone in the dark!

by Priyanka   Sep 19, 2005


Alone in the dark
-Priyanka

Alone in the darkness...
The sounds seem afar...
The midnight sky is clear; all I can see is a lone star...
The star blinks reminding me of you
Standing all alone; yet distracting me too
I close my eyes and try to forget
But the persistent light reminding me that deep within my soul you are set...
If my childish dreams ever could be made true...
I would have asked only for you...
But I see you standing there, mocking at me...
Loneliness doesnt become you, you do have a companion I see
Love for you was always like a game...
Was it me or someone else it was all the same...
I know that you know how to get your way...
But not everyone can love you the way I do every single day
I smile through my tears and wave you goodbye
Too proud to tell you that without you I'd die
It doesn't seem to make a least difference to you I know,
You wave back, like always letting me go...
My steps falter but I go on...
I wish I could make you love me for now, thereon...
Alone in the darkness again I disappear...
Chasing the sounds of loneliness, that will follow me forever!

Okay...i know this is again REALLY STUPID..but it is just something that i was thinking..and put it on paper..all thanks to my jerk ex...anyways..plz do comment on it..no matter how horrible you think it is....Thanks for reading

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  • 19 years ago

    by anagha

    Hiya babes...u no wat i feel abt this... told u last time... its grt!!! and forget that damned jerk... pls... i hope u r feeling better now that its over... bye then take care...

  • 19 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well it's really good. I don't think it's a stupid one! Very emotional indeed! Well done! By the way... If you get a chance plz check few my poems too! Cheers!

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Some sounds we would like to hear always,forever remains as a whisper in our ears....beautiful and heart touching poem...No poem written from a heart's dictionary sounds stupid...take care and keep smiling always....