Hey, i really like this. It's cleverly written and is incredibly powerful,. There's a lot of deep ideas too.
XXX Cici XXX

Damn, that was nothing short of great. You are really something great, you know? thanks for the comments, its no biggie, some of the other poets here think that I'm not a guy, because of the way I do my poems... *sighs* sadness, heartache, depression, suicide, all the things a female poet writes about, because its kind of uncommon to see this coming from a guy... I'm rambling now, anyways, a great poem. ^_^x

HansRik
awww, your poem was really sad but yet really cute. The flow went well and it was well written! Nice job...you're one of my favorites ^_^! Please always take care and keep it up 5/5

*~Always Your fan~*
Gesselle

I feel a great connection with this poem. Like the style and flow and scheme....simply have nothing bad to say about it.

Very good. hey, i have to admit to you, our souls ARE reflected through our eyes, but not in the color. I know this because I get visions when I lock eyes with people up close. it's a bit scary, but I'm trying to learn how to control it. anyway, the poem is well written and the idea is interesting and different. I admire your skills.5/5

This poem is very powerful and deep very good. its flow and structure were perfect :D