My darling why didn't you tell me before,
I can stop you from hurting anymore,
Don't hide such awful things from me,
Whatever you think you know I'll agree,
I love you too much to hear of your pain,
In this state, I cannot let you remain,
If this happens again, tell me, please,
Don't let him beat you to your knees.
:-) Great Job Liz!
Well, just want you to know that even tho its a really short poem, its really good! Great job, the flow went well and I like it alot. Take care and keep it up 5/5