by shawn hoskins Sep 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Why did you have to go and leave me here alone,it hurts so bad to know your gone,the last time i saw you we left each other mad,just a regular argument no different then the ones we've had,but this time it's different theres no making up,you decided to drink and drive that night and you pressed your luck,you never even saw the red light ahead,you crossed the intersection now two people are dead,i wish i could have stopped you and told you to stay,now your gone and i feel like i am to blame,without you my life will never be the same,this never should have happened it's such a shame,as time goes by the pain may subside you see,but it will never fill the void left when you died inside of me. |
Hmm...this is pretty good...but don't think it's good enough...well..still think it's very nice... |
by nikki
Im sry that, that happened but again great job you have serious talent great job keep up the good work 5/5 |
by N J Thornton
Aww so sad and soo sweet. I really enjoyed this one and the ending made me say "aww." |
WoW...This is the best drunk driving poem I've read in a long long while.... |
Sad..yet again but very beautiful |