AW THIS SERIOUSLY MADE ME CRY...5/5

Sad..yet again but very beautiful

WoW...This is the best drunk driving poem I've read in a long long while....
Ash

Aww so sad and soo sweet. I really enjoyed this one and the ending made me say "aww."

ok here's the problem, you said "as time go by the pain may subside" and it should be "as time goes by the pain may subside"

Keep writing, I enjoyed this one.

Im sry that, that happened but again great job you have serious talent great job keep up the good work 5/5

Hmm...this is pretty good...but don't think it's good enough...well..still think it's very nice...