by Ann Stareyes
Love portrayed for a special friend and I'm sure she would rather have you in her life... This one truly touched me, that friend will always be there for you Amanda... hugs, love, Ann |
What??? No no Amanda, you are so so wrong....You say that you have lost all of your friends, then what am I??? I'm always here for you, YOU KNOW THAT, so why don't you talk to me, I want to know what's going on.....I'm so worried now....Please don't say goodbye hun, I can't live without you, you are the one helping me through life and I help you right??? We got eachother....Ok now I have tears in my eyes, I really want to know if you are ok??? |
I thought it was very good your very talented |
I think that this is very exceptional...keep up the great work... and i love the way that u wrote this...keep up the great work...5/5 |
by ShadowDancer
One of your best i think. it has alot of emotions brewing underneath the serface. i love it. as all your poems do it flows well, and has a beautiful meaning |