by shawn hoskins Sep 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Have you ever thought you couldn't make it through,all your hopes and dreams weren't coming true,nothing that you do goes right,everything around you seems so dull and not bright,the littlest things you do go wrong,you feel somehow you just don't belong,well keep your head up good things are bound to come,your no different then anybody else,just give it a little time and you will find yourself,things will turn around and you'll feel better,put your faith in god and his love will shine on you forever. |
I really enjoyed this poem you've got really good ideas and you know how to express yourself. |
by Katlynn
This is cute. i really enjoyed it. It's like whatever you do good or bad God will always be there to love you never begin to hate. You did an amazing job once again. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
by Amanda
Awww. good write! i'm very pleased i came across your work :) |
Very well written |
Wow, very dep hunny, keep it up i love your faith in God, maybe chek out my poem "I'm a Witness.." |