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  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    That's interesting, very good. My favourite lines are:

    "To want to scream,

    To want to cry,

    To want to run,

    To jump and die. "

    Nice usage of words, made me think why were you dpressed in the first place?

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by the middle

    Well in fear of sounding repetitive of all the other commenters, i have to just agree with all they said.
    it was an interesting poem, and i liked the same lines that atomic liked.
    good work...
    take care xoxoxo