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by Atomic
That's interesting, very good. My favourite lines are: "To want to scream, To want to cry, To want to run, To jump and die. " Nice usage of words, made me think why were you dpressed in the first place? ( )_( ) (='.'=) (")-(") Arrivederci!
by the middle
Well in fear of sounding repetitive of all the other commenters, i have to just agree with all they said. it was an interesting poem, and i liked the same lines that atomic liked. good work... take care xoxoxo