I like it!!! Keep writing.

Aw.. very sweet,

Aww its so sweet. i loved it

How very sweet Travis...you're such a doll with a golden heart! It's not your best, but I can feel the words pulsing throgh me as I read it (if that makes sense to you) and I just really loved it all together...great job my love.

Forever I Remain,
DarkSuicide

Aww that's so sweet... amazing poem!!! im glad you found her :D best of luck for you both.
-xXx-

Awww....so cute! Nice rhyme, topic and feeling. All great!

Good Writing!
beth

Very nice flow.. its nicely written.. the message its self is beautiful.. well done

Another beautiful poem!!!! I almost cried because its was so full of heart and emotion!!! YOU ROCK!!!!

Wow. amazing job. just wow. i hope you should her this. gosh your so in love with her. i love this poem your so talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I like your poems, they're really good!

Beautiful poem