Tell me...

by Laura Ash   Sep 20, 2005


I want to make things right
Like when we first met
My promise to you
I never kept

Everywhere I look
Left and right
Nothings the same
Our friendship has taken a one way flight

Too embarrassed
Too much pride
To say how I feel
It's something I feel I need to hide

I wish I could tell you
I wish it would be
I'm begging you
Will you please forgive me

Sometimes I think
And sometimes I wonder
What would I do
If you finally found her

If i feel this way now
How would I feel then
Tell me why, and tell me how
If your my friend
And you forgive

Listen to what I have to say
Listen to my and tell me this
Tell me why I feel this way
Tell me how you felt today
Tell me if I went away
Would you have anything to say?

Would you even notice at all?
Would you care enough to call?

If I said sorry,
Would you forgive me?
Or if I said sorry,
Would you ignore me?

Tell me why I feel this way
Tell me that your here to stay

Dedicated to D.I.
Written on September 19, 2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by sarah

    Awsome poem 5/5 i really enjoyed it your rhyming and rythem is so good. you really wrote this one well and showed a lot of character in it. nice job
    Laura i can't believe your so good but yet so young keep it up i want to read some more.

  • 19 years ago

    by sarah

    Good job on the poem. i had a relationship like that and i really did love him as you could tell in some of my poems but it just didn't work out we are good friends now though and sometimes its hard to realize that hes gone but you just got to learn how to live. well i sure do hope everything works out for the best. good poem
    sarah

  • 19 years ago

    by John Bender

    Great poem I like the way you put that together I am the one that gave you a 5. If it's ok I would like to know what happened to make you write that one. If you could remember I want to know how similar your friends poem is to mine.