Great poem I like the way you put that together I am the one that gave you a 5. If it's ok I would like to know what happened to make you write that one. If you could remember I want to know how similar your friends poem is to mine.

Good job on the poem. i had a relationship like that and i really did love him as you could tell in some of my poems but it just didn't work out we are good friends now though and sometimes its hard to realize that hes gone but you just got to learn how to live. well i sure do hope everything works out for the best. good poem
sarah

Awsome poem 5/5 i really enjoyed it your rhyming and rythem is so good. you really wrote this one well and showed a lot of character in it. nice job
Laura i can't believe your so good but yet so young keep it up i want to read some more.