by the middle
Hun... don't leave... this is far from your fate. |
Heyyy- |
by Nicole Maree
This was real deep but so beautiful and you are so right it's so weird but i completely understand your feelings. Keep up the awesome work. You're such an amazing writer because all your poems have so much feeeling and thought in them. Take care. Luv Nicole =) |
Wow beautiful hun, very touching, I loved the third verse, very beautuflyy done & I can relate to it all, great work my dear keep it up lubzz you |
Hey luvin the poem!!! keep writing! i can totally relate! i no how u feel 2 be left out while other people are happy And have it all but u feel like u have nothing...! i love your writing technique, check out more of my poems they remind me a bit of yours, read a life of total unhappiness, its my favourite! thanx 4 ur comment on my peom! im here if u need someone to talk 2! |
Nice one hun... |