Wow ur poems r really good keep up the good wrk girl and a wish u and james the the vest of luck:)

Ghah!, i liked this one as wel. good work. Huggles u

So so so so sweet!!! ur such a beautiful writer!!

Wow i think this is so much like wat daniel thinks bout me especilly the trust part

Luv Ya LJ

Thats really good, i think its sweet. It feels like me talking to my parents...a lot like it. Anyways comment on ur peoms soon. bye

Aww, that's sooo cute! 4/5. It flowed and rymed, but it needs slight adjustment in the lonely part. I don't know why, but it just seemed to weaken the rest of the poem. perhaps re-wording it would make it better?

Aww, great job! I say 4/5 on this one, it's pretty good. The wording might be rough around the lonely part, I'll agree. But it's still a cute poem.

Again, a little simple vernacularly, but your point is well understood and your scheme is intact.

This poems is so good, I wish I had your talent. Great job.5/5....

Short and sweet. great work again. very heartfelt. loved it

Ruby