I cant belive no one has commented or voted i loved it and i can relate keep up the work

Ps thanks for the comment

Hey this is so sad that someone treated you like this hope you are okay xxx

U deseve to have that 5 it great u where treated like shit!!!
love the poem
xxx

You say I'm a pathetic person,
I cry with the realization.
Nothing i ever do is right,
Everything can ever be enough.

I love this part, nothing i do is right too, and it always hurt when they bring us down.

Good one, keep, keep, keep writing and thanks for your comments, i very, very, very happy.

Tis a good poem it's ending semms a little like it just stops in the middle but other than tha it's nice

Screw ppl like him..who cares abt such a person??who will love u will love u for who u r .. ur beautiifull from the inside nd the outside doesnt matter// i loved ur poem.. nd i kno u can b strong without this person

M sorry this is abt ur dad.. i kno its hard .. so just try to go on wid ur life.. thats the way life is.. read my new poem .. its abt mye x

Aww that was such a sad but touching poem. No one should ever be treated like that. Keep up the great work. And thanks for the comment on my poem and your welcome for the comment on you rother poem...I make sure I always return a comment. Take Care and Stay Strong. Luv Nicole =)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! that made me cry!! ur too much of a great person to be treated like that!! its a really good poem and like ive said before u have so much talkent so dont EVER stop writting because ur poems r SOOOO gooD!! plz keep it up and im here 2 talk 5/5 all the way

I love that

its soo good
it reminds me of my dad !!

GREAT JOB AND POEM!!

id say 5/5 !!

Aww hun, once again I feel like i am the girl in poem wow, it is so beautiful, I dont know what to say, you have a very unique talent & your writing is absolutely fantastic, great work keep it up