Deaths Shadow

by LonelyNightsHurt   Sep 20, 2005


Death calls, shadow falls
Horrors on the walls

Mistakes made, lives were paid
In the course, he got laid

Drinks were downed, smiles frowned
Not one thing heard, no sound

Girls in skirts, with s k a n k y shirts
What you did, really hurts

Ladies raped, smiles faked
Your life, hers is shaped

Used knives, misplaced strives
Looking for hits, making strives

Down the drain, feel the pain
Her life live in shame

People cry, they wonder why
Dressed in black, why'd she die?

Not like my others i know, but i liked it...please comment and let me know please

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  • 18 years ago

    by silent eyes

    Love your poem *5/5* good job ~silent eyes~

  • 18 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Yeah i liked it, great use of words and loving the theme, on some levels

  • 19 years ago

    by Crystal

    Um.... wow.... its good... out of things to say....

    love ya....