Hi you know what that poem is exactly how i feel/felt about someone!!
its hurts doesnt it when you love them and they hurt you but they are already with someone else?? well thats what im deal with at thwe moment!
but i do have to say its a good poem.. you should be pleased with it! if you aint looked at mine yet have a look and tell me wht you thinnk??.
xhx

Very nicely done!!!