October wind

by silhouette fairy   Sep 20, 2005


The October wind blows by
your voice was in it
your presence was felt

now there isn't a day that goes by
that i don't sit and cry
could you come back, just this once

is love just a word
or does it have meaning
what does it mean to you

i thought love was a bond
something that could never end
with time that thought was changed

now love is hate
could it ever be the same
i think not

you said you loved me, once
but like this feeling
it came to an end

this poem is going to be published soon i'm so excited. YAY

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    First I would like to thank you for the comments I recieved from you . I really appreaciated it . Second let me congradulate you on another brilliant piece of work . Besides a few mispellings ( that we all tend to make..lol) I think it's terrific . You keep the reader focused on the true topic . Good job .

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Cool. i like the short meaning :]

    im glad you like my poems, you're one of the commenters i've had in DAYS :) thanks so much, it means a lot to me.

    good luck on the publication!

  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Than you

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    Hey! I love this poems it's REALLY GOOD! I can totally relate to it, love it!

    ~*Erika*Jo*~

  • 19 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    You do know that this poem is about that person that sits at the table with us that Aubrey knows my past and his past.

    i think i like maybe even love him?

    e-chan

    help me b-chan