by ratchild666 Sep 20, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
There you sat |
by StormShadow
Hey! brilliant poem! quite chilling, which just makes it even better 2 read lol the poem works great and you close it with a very good last stanza. keep up the good work! |
Woow!!very touching and full of meaning!thanx for commenting on my poem...means alot!!keep smiling!!ur an extremely talented writer!!xxxxx |
by Jay
Woah that was dark ... but really good. i really liked your word use and imagry. i felt like i was right there in the scene! keep it up! |
Amazing. You were right it sound alot like the one I wrote. I read it and see what I want to do to my father because of all the pain he gave me. And to all the other men that have abused me in my life. |
by Avellana
There you sat |