You Were All That I Could See

by ratchild666   Sep 20, 2005


There you sat
Watching TV
You were all
That I could see
Hear your laughter
Hear your lies
Soon I'll hear
Your dying cries
There I stood
Gripping the knife
I could use to
End your life

There I stood
Your back to me
You were all
That I could see
One step forward
Pause, then two
Creeping closer
Behind you
All your torment
All the time
Now your body's
Close to mine

There we were
You and me
You were all
That I could see
Time slows down
I'll end the pain
And the darkness
Of your reign
Here I go
No turning away
This will be
Your darkest day

There you sat
Below me
You were all
That I could see
Clenched fist rises
Into the air
So still you were
Just sat there
Bring it down
And there an end
Blood will spill
My heart will mend

There I thought
About you and me
You were all
That I could see
Down goes the blade
Into your head
Soon my fear
Will be dead
Again I stab
Into your mind
Revenge of
The sweetest kind

There you were
And there you fell
See you in
The fires of hell
You didn't breathe
A word to me
Only a look
Of empathy
One last glare
That cut me deep
As you eternally
Went to sleep

There you lay
I hurt no more
Your red wine
Staining the floor
Then you took
Your last breath
And crossed silently over
Into death

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  • 18 years ago

    by StormShadow

    Hey! brilliant poem! quite chilling, which just makes it even better 2 read lol the poem works great and you close it with a very good last stanza. keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by emptily whole

    Woow!!very touching and full of meaning!thanx for commenting on my poem...means alot!!keep smiling!!ur an extremely talented writer!!xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay

    Woah that was dark ... but really good. i really liked your word use and imagry. i felt like i was right there in the scene! keep it up!

    ~~Jay

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather Prior

    Amazing. You were right it sound alot like the one I wrote. I read it and see what I want to do to my father because of all the pain he gave me. And to all the other men that have abused me in my life.

  • 19 years ago

    by Avellana

    There you sat
    Below me
    You were all
    That I could see

    theres a way that just makes them flow into each other, i had to comment cos it's so cool! lol!

    lv ,a x