The Disappearance

by Sebastian   Sep 20, 2005


I am shivering inside
But haven't yet shed the tears
Even though I've been released
from all my fears
Now It's time
Time to disappear
From your world
Where you aren't near

(very short....but it was the first poem i ever wrote)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    It's you're first poem and it's awsome!
    keep on writing cause u r talented ^^
    take care.

    adios!

    pili

  • 19 years ago

    by ratchild666

    Thats some good stuff... maybe u should try making it longer and adding a bit, like another verse or something. its a great start.

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