Awwww....brittany.... |
Hey sweetie! wow...that was good...but i think you could put a bit more figuative language in there....ik how u feel though. |
by Ali
Aww that was sweet! i like it lots bee!!! But whose it about? It doesnt really sound like rach, idk she seems to, into things ya know? anyway no matter who its about no matter WHY you wrote it it kicks ass girl keep it up!!! |